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A Life Gone Sour


Magpie Tales posts a weekly prompt to stimulate the creative process.  Check it out…it’s fun.  Anyway, the photo above is this week’s prompt.  Here’s is my take on it.

I came upon a lemon

That lay bleeding in the sun

“I’ve lost my zest for living

Stick a fork in me…I’m done”


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  1. March 2, 2011 at 7:00 AM

    Sharp and witty with a twist of lemon!

  2. Helen
    March 2, 2011 at 8:48 AM

    Loved the clever rhyme … short and sweet/sour.

  3. March 2, 2011 at 9:08 AM

    Done. Done like potatoes.

  4. March 2, 2011 at 1:43 PM

    I adore quickies that make me giggle!

  5. March 2, 2011 at 2:42 PM

    Short and bloody mag. Nice!

  6. March 2, 2011 at 11:42 PM

    Laughing – this is a zesty tasty piece – well done!

  7. Elaine Spall
    March 2, 2011 at 11:45 PM

    Well “Done!!!”

  8. March 3, 2011 at 2:18 AM

    Oh, yes! A rhyme after my own heart here! Great Magpie!

  9. March 6, 2011 at 12:07 AM

    How do you come up with these? Rhyming always stumps me. Brilliantly done!

  10. March 6, 2011 at 10:08 AM

    I have one word
    HILARIOUS!!!!!
    😉

  11. honeyhaiku
    March 12, 2011 at 10:40 PM

    Ha, this is marvelous! Laughing out loud!

  12. March 14, 2016 at 9:47 AM

    Wow – your mind must be sharp!

    • March 18, 2016 at 10:22 PM

      Sharp…I don’t know…more like one off. Thanks for stopping by.

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