Trouble In Camelot
T.H. White’s classic, The Once and Future King, is a retelling of the Arthurian legend. It is 64,183 words long. Here’s my attempt to tell the same story in rhyme with 225 words. I may have left out a few details.
Young Arthur, who pulls sword from stone
Is destined then to hold the throne
Gets seduced by his half-sister
Bears a child, a twisted mister
Ascends the throne and picks a spot
To build idyllic Camelot
Where the rule is: Do what’s right
To quest is better than to fight
To aid him in this noble dream
Pure Art must build a righteous team
His knights, the finest of the lot
The first among them, Lancelot
But shame on young, disloyal Lance
He cannot keep it in his pants
Alas, Art’s wife’s no gem I fear
The Lance-a-lusting Guinevere
Oh, our boy, Lance is quite the swain
He’s also doing young Elaine
They have a kid, but that’s not bad
It’s fair and perfect Galahad
Adding luster to the fable
Art says they must have a table
To keep their hearts so just, so true
Well, only one that’s round will do
Then there’s Merlin, clever wizard
Victim of his trouser lizard
He gets seduced and locked away
By sexy, sultry Nimue
That’s quite shame for all concerned
Without his help, poor Art gets burned
When Mordred, Arthur’s nephew-son
Rat’s out young Lance…all comes undone
It’s hard to live life pure and true
When you don’t know who’s doing who
The dream of Camelot was gone
Just too much lancing going on
This post is linked to One Stop Poetry and Big Tent Poetry
Love this rhyming tale of long ago. 🙂
He sure did lance a lot. (LOL!)
A Ballad…I love ballads. Well done!
ha. wonderful play on camelot….love the tales of yore…and your rendition…
Ha ha ha! You had me laughing the whole way through this, vb.
Pamela
I loved this… so funny and right-on! I think you covered it very well! 🙂
truly any story can be a comedy, it all depends on how you tell it. I enjoyed this piece, well thought out, well written.
peace, love, and peaches
WEdB Lake
what a scream..you’ve done a find bending…needed that smile, thanks!
Haha! Well lampooned!
hilarious! the people of middle age were really confused for sure.
A most entertaining telling of the classic tales…the way you show it, well, I guess they certainly did have a certain common problem between the lot…just couldn’t keep it in their pants…very fun piece.
Very witty and amusing. This truly made me smile. Thanks for sharing.
Ferry me to Camelot
Where knights of old
Did lance a lot.
James.
Naughty Lance A Lot!
Anna :o]
This is awesome!
Good rhyming there, mate. A good laugh, indeed.
Mayhaps, ’twas so cold back them.
The lance was needed
To keep the players warm
Laughing…Excellent!
You did excellent!
order of the day
Very funny. Well done. (I thought I knew the story but now I’m all confused!)
This a truly a fantastic piece. I loved it!
To much lancing going on indeed ::grins:: Thank you so much for the laugh from a poem born of pure talent.
Oh Camelot, where are you now? You’d make a great scriptwriter for BBC tv’s Merlin drama…
Still laughing – this is priceless!
waiting for your next poem!
Camelot as soap opera. It’s fun and delightful. And the “lance” pun – priceless.
Thanks to all who have taken the time to read, comment and encourage. This and Raven Redux are original works, but “condensing” plots is not an original concept. I have always enjoyed reading these tongue-in-cheek abridgments of the originals. I’m going to try another one soon. Vb
Brilliant. Love it!
“Victim of his trouser lizard” LOL
Gets seduced by his half-sister
Bears a child, a twisted mister
Lol!!
Great job! Hilarious!
What a brilliant poem!
You’ve tempted me to start reading your blog backwards. The more I read, the more I love your ‘versebending humour’. But I wish you enabled emails, so your comments didn’t come labelled ‘noreply-comment@blogger.com’, for then I could reply with quick quips when your comments pop up in my inbox! LOL
Ok…I think I just did…new to this blogging thing.
I loved this take on the legend of King Arthur. Really clever and quite amusing! How does one follow your blog page? No place to click into to become a “Follower”
I think it can be done, but I haven’t figured it out yet…still working…thanks for asking. If I ever get it figured out, I’ll let you know. Vb